In the middle of the first semester of school, the entire seventh grade was tested for basic skills. Steve hurried through his tests, and continued to dream of other things, as the day wore on. His heart was not in school, but in the woods, where he often escaped alone, trying to shut out the sights, sounds and smells of his alcoholic home. No one checked on him to see if he was safe. No one knew he was gone, because no one was sober(清醒的) enough to care. Oddly, Steve never missed a day of school.
One day, Miss White’s impatient voice broke into his daydreams. “Steve!!” Startled, he turned to look at her.
“Pay attention!”
Steve locked his gaze on Miss White with adolescent adoration (青春期的爱慕), as she began to go over the test results for the seventh grade.
“You all did pretty well,” she told the class, “except for one boy, and it breaks my heart to tell you this, but……” She hesitated, pinning Steve to his seat with a sharp stare, her eyes searching his face.
“……The smartest boy in the seventh grade is failing my class!”
She just stared at Steve, as the class spun around for a good look. Steve dropped his eyes and carefully examined his fingertips.
After that, it was war!! Steve still wouldn’t do his homework. Even as the punishments became more severe, he remained stubborn.
“Just try it! ONE WEEK!” He was unmoved.
“You’re smart enough! You’ll see a change!” Nothing fazed hi
“Give yourself a chance! Don’t give up on your life!” Nothing.
“Steve! Please! I care about you!”
Wow! Suddenly, Steve got it!! Someone cared about him? Someone, totally unattainable and perfect, CARED ABOUT HIM??!!
Steve went home from school, thoughtful, that afternoon. Walking into the house, he took one look around. Both parents were passed out, in various stages of undress, and the stench(恶臭) was overpowering! He, quickly, gathered up his camping gear, a jar of peanut butter, a loaf of bread, a bottle of water, and this time……his schoolbooks. Grim faced and determined, he headed for the woods.
The following Monday he arrived at school on time, and he waited for Miss White to enter the classroo She walked in, all sparkle and smiles! God, she was beautiful! He yearned for her smile to turn on hi
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It did not.
Miss White, immediately, gave a quiz on the weekend homework. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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He discovered that he could understand and retain knowledge, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
极夜轨迹
--- the first chapter---
原版(正经的)故事梗概:从前有一个十二岁的学渣名叫史蒂夫,他懒得学习更懒得做作业。尽管他身高很高(外表很显眼的意思),但仍然没人注意他。直到有一天……一个姓白的老师(怀特吧喂!)来到了他的班级。
那一天,史蒂夫感觉自己恋爱了。
……然而恋爱什么的并没有什么卵用,他依然是个怠惰的差生。有一次考试他考得异常之萎,引起了白老师(怀特老师啊喂!)的不满,于是白老师(这个梗你还要用几次啊!_(:з)∠)_)找他喝茶。不管怎么好说歹说都没有戳中史蒂夫的□□,但当她无意中说出自己很在乎史蒂夫的时候,史蒂夫的基佬之魂觉醒了(什么奇怪的东西混了进来!)。他决定洗心革面重新做人。毕竟他可是mc世界徒手碎大石的大佬啊,小僵尸小蜘蛛小白纷纷拜倒在他的短裤下,随便追求个初中女老师什么的根本不在话下。
------接下来是读后续写段落
日常性转故事梗概:
从前有一个差生她名叫星野,她沉迷游戏不能自拔,懒得学习更懒得做作业。日复一日地怠惰,尽管她外表不错但仍然很不起眼,没人关注她。直到有一天……选考成绩来到了她的班级。跟预料中一样,她用笔和试卷完成了一次核爆。当晚她想不开想要离开这个世界,这个没有人在乎她没有未来可言的世界。
这样想着,她进入了梦乡。
……
------接下来是作者脑洞时间
史蒂夫-星野 white-白默
极夜轨迹
一阵风从敞开着的窗户里吹进来,顺便拂过坐在后排窗边的星野的额发。散落下来,盖住一半眼睛的过长刘海被微微撩起,露出了她因过度疲劳而缺乏神采的双眼。
星野用手背抹了抹眼眶下的青黑,继续低下头作出认真听课的模样。
绵密的白云在仅能获得的一方视野中慢慢移动,渐渐遮住了阳光。
星野坐在教室的左后方,远离门靠窗的一边。正如位置暗示的那样,她是个不起眼的吊车尾学生,虽然成绩不佳,但好在行为安分,为人沉默,并不引起老师注意。
也正因如此,她的内心渐渐被惰性和孤独侵蚀,隐藏在一贯软弱内向的外表下的变化,连最亲近的父母都未曾觉察。
就这样,从高一开始,星野的成绩逐年下滑。
外人看到的是她貌似不变的努力,只有她知道,原本回家后认真看书的时间越来越少,取而代之的是以查资料为由,整夜整夜地玩游戏。书本上的内容已经无法在她的心中留下任何哪怕微弱的印象,花团锦簇的游戏世界成为了她的内心世界。
“星野,妈妈知道你一直很努力学习,这次没考好并不重要,只要你坚持下来,就一定能……”
“嗯。”
像每个对自己差强人意的成绩感到抱歉的女儿一样,星野低下头,挡住因熬夜玩游戏而微微发红的眼圈。
对于每个吊车尾学生,有这样善解人意的家长,不仅不会在自己考砸的时候破口大骂或是冷漠以待,还反过来理解自己、安慰自己,应该都是值得高兴的事吧。
可是,她知道这不是自己想要的。
这样看似温情,实则隔着距离的话语,无法打动她怠惰腐朽的内心。
父母根本不了解真正的她。他们安慰的是那个行为符合常理的,存在于想象中的“星野”,一个持续努力学习却一直无法获得好成绩的学生。
如果可以,她甚至希望他们言简意赅地直指她最阴暗最隐秘的内心。
“每天晚上你究竟在干些什么?学习效率很低吧?你的努力都是装出来给我们看的吗,如果是这样,那还不如不要去学校了!”
类似这样,一点也不温柔解意的话,她想听到。
在学校里也是一样,从一开始的有人能一起吃饭、一起回家到后来的独来独往。
开始玩游戏之后,她的兴趣日渐转移到那个虚幻的二次元世界中,与昔日好朋友的共同话题变少了。
“我昨天,咳,双休日不小心搜到了一个单机游戏,然后试玩了一下,感觉很有意思。里面的男主角一个人脚踏十几条船,由玩家来操作他的每日作息、安排行程表来使他不翻船。里面有一个女主角是个病娇,查岗查得超级严,还偷偷跟踪男主的另一个高中生女友……”
“星野?”一直沉默着的好朋友出声打断她。
“嗯?对不起,这个剧情以前从来没见过,就忍不住滔滔不绝了……”
好朋友向她露出“善解人意”的微笑:“没关系。”
“……”
“……”
两人默默走路,沉默像胶布粘住了星野的嘴,不知道该开口说些什么,即使聊天也会只剩下尴尬。
次日,再次在路上遇到好朋友,除了打一声招呼之外,什么都说不出来了。
一天一天,每次在她忍不住谈起有关游戏的话题,说到兴头上,都会看到好朋友不耐烦的侧脸。直到她终于失去了继续来往的信心。
“对不起,明天开始,我还是一个人吃饭吧。”
“……”
“别想多,我只是想早点回教室而已,一个人会比较灵活。”
现在想起来,好像那次是她最后一次和好友对话。
以前的“好朋友”,在路上见到只能匆匆绕道避开,实在避不开,一定要打照面的时候,点点头就从身边走过,也不知道自己那可以忽略不计的示意对方有没有注意到。然而,也不再有直视对方的勇气了。
反正没有人能理解,自己发起的话题,自己迷恋的游戏,很多时候都不被现实中的同龄人所熟知。熟悉的人或许还会忍耐她的喋喋不休,不熟悉的人更是连发起话题都做不到。
“今天又没有跟同学说过一句话。”
某一天快要放学的时候,星野在课桌下面刻了一道划痕,“以后有哪一天没有跟同学说话的话,就在这里做一个记号吧。”
一个人行动也没有什么不好啊,不是自由自在、不受拘束吗?
朋友……不需要了。
“唉……”好不容易挨到下课,星野趴在课桌上假装睡觉,把脸埋在臂弯里睁着眼睛数课桌下面的陈年划痕。
每天早上上学、开小差、假装听课、放学回家打游戏……
无限循环的无聊日子究竟还要多久才能结束?